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Writing tips

Writing Short Stories

Writing Short Stories

29 March 2011 by Stuart Evers

I'm wary about giving advice. Writing is such a personal thing that putting across a set of edicts everyone should follow seems rather reductive. After all, I write in a certain way that would, for example, probably be of no use to someone writing an historical or SF novel. That said there are some general things that I think do apply to all creative writing.

> If you're a writer, you have to be a reader

I became a writer because I was a reader first; and I wouldn't have written anything without that grounding. When I was an editor, I used to receive cover letters from people proud of the fact that they hadn't read many books. They'd claim that, as a consequence, their typescript was undoubtedly original. They never, ever were.

 

Read as widely as you can, in the genre in which you wish to write, and far outside of it. Keep reading. Read some more. Ask booksellers for recommendations, read blogs about books, go to the library. Read some more. The best writers were and are readers; bestselling novelists are readers too. If you want to be anything in between - or preferably that rare bird that is both - you need to read too.

> Do not compare yourself favourably or unfavourably to another writer

While reading is vital, it's just as important to not get bogged down by thinking too much about other writers. Reading a book like Austerlitz by W G Sebald, The Collected Stories of Grace Paley or The Unconsoled by Kazuo Ishiguro can be a debilitating experience: you read them and think, well I could never write as well as that. Similarly you can read the hot new debut, or novel that has received acres of fawning reviews and think, I could do better than that; I'm a much better writer, why don't I get the plaudits? Both responses  are as damaging. One can lead to a crushing lack of confidence; the other an unbearable kind of arrogance.

Your work  is your work. It has nothing to do with any other writer. You need all the energy you can muster to be a write, so why waste it on railing against the system, or other writers? Conserve the energy, channel it into your fiction. And if you do read something that so floors you that you can't imagine writing again, remember that someone might just think the same thing of yours at some point, but unless you keep writing, you'll never know.

> You're a writer, so write!


Peter Cook - or so the story that I once heard goes - was at a party. He was talking to a journalist and  asked him what he was working on at that moment. 'Actually,' the man said, 'I'm writing a novel.' Cook looked him up and down: 'How interesting!' he said. 'Neither am I.'

 

Writing is a slog. It takes effort, discipline, nerve and devotion. Haruki Murakami said writing a book is like long distance running, and it's true: you have to do a lot of training before you can attempt the marathon. Find a routine that works for you and stick to it. Raymond Carver, at first, only wrote once his kids had gone down for the night; Jonathan Franzen hired an office and treated writing like a day job. How you do it is irrelevant: all that matters is that you're producing the work. Without that you might as well call yourself an astronaut, a footballer or Jon Bon Jovi.

 

> Find an encouraging, but honest, reader

Of all my suggestions, this is the most difficult one - because this is the one thing you have no control over. I've been exceptionally lucky to have people who are sympathetic to what I write, but are not afraid to say when something doesn't work or could be improved upon. If you find such a person, or persons, hang on to them like you're scrabbling on the edge of a precipice: they are unbelievably precious.

> Look around you: there are stories everywhere


Near the beginning of Robert Altman's film The Player the new studio executive flicks through a paper and finds a story he thinks could make a movie. 'What do we pay the writers for?' he says (or words to that effect at least) and perhaps the answer is: to bring life to such narratives . No matter what genre you're writing in, if you're alive to the stories around you - conversations in pubs or at the bus stop, the way an old woman dresses, the kids hanging about outside the school - you'll never be short on inspiration. Writing may be a solitary pursuit, but generating ideas should not be.

Comments

Thank you indeed. Well written! Please go on with your insightful ideas.

Ahmed Saadallah
24 February 2013

You have AWESOME advice! Especially about the honest but encouraging reader. Well all my friends are DEFINITELY honest, but I don't really know about 'encouraging' though.

Issie
30 December 2012

Useful tips, I have so many ideas, particularly about immigration, in my head but I always feel hesitant to write in English because it is my second language. Do you think I need a lot of vocabularies in order to write a fascinating and good read story?

Abdul
22 November 2012

These writing tips are very valuable.

sayed husain imam gulsher
31 July 2012

thanks, i do read and when my brain gets going i go to wonderful places, but i do think, i wish i could right as beautifully as that, i have a head full of stories as does my hard drive, but i write because it brings it to life for me... one day i may write a good book but for now, i'm just enjoying it... may have to read catch twenty two again... might not get so lost a second time... thanks for the advice...time to read a book!!!

linda gilday
4 July 2012

Join a writing group you feel comfortable in - the other people don't have to write in your genre, just be kind, welcoming and understand writers. I've joined a Speculative Fiction Group, Romance Writers Australia and (currently) Northern Beaches Writers Group -we meet in Manly, NSW, right on the waterfront.

Chris Faulk in Australia
23 January 2012

Really love this. Taken down all the tips and would start implementing it.

Ibifiri Kamson
21 January 2012

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